“Started off interesting and original, but hit the same beats over and over again.”
“I just couldn’t stay engaged in this.”
“The back-and-forth was draining. The interactions didn’t feel natural.”
“The gross-out factor of the last section stuck with me, but not in a way I enjoyed.”
“This was great until the totally unexplained kiss in the middle.”
“I kept waiting for it to get creepy or weird or surprising in some way.”
“There was little tension in the climax.”
“If this is satirizing something, I’m not sure what.”
“Very experimental. Not quite my style.”
“The transitions were messy and disorienting.”
“Most of the dialogue was stiff.”
“The arc was pretty flat. I was left feeling a little ‘So what?’ after the sudden ending.”